A critic on a Position Paper: "No to Greyhound Racing in the Philippines"

The position paper I have read entitled "No to Greyhound Racing in the Philippines" written by the Philippine Animal Welfare Society (PAWS)'s is informative and interesting one. The said paper is all about the Bill that will allow Greyhound Racing in the country which is being workout by other lawmakers so that it will become a law, but thousands of people are against it specifically the PAWS.
In the said paper, they presented the reasons why the bill should not be pass. According to them Greyhound racing is cruel that it will lead to massive Greyhound breeding and killings; secondly Greyhound racing cannot be operated in a Humane manner and lastly the racing is immoral and unethical by its very nature which was the main reason why it is being boycotted and strongly opposed by many International Organization.
In addition the paper describe, define, illustrate and analyze each and every reason why Greyhound Racing or the House Bill 5291 should not become a law,for in the first place our country is already problematic in finding place for those thousands of displace dogs roaming around.
The most important thing here is that the paper has a very strong emotional appeal o the reader and it is really convincing that they have a good point in saying that Greyhound Racing can do nothing to our country but will only add burden not only to the people who are into it but to the whole Philippine society. As a whole the position paper was great and I really understand even feel the grievances they have, so to say I'm on their side and on their stand or wherever the authors stand I'm petty sure you can find me at his back. There was a clear and appropriate use of language which makes everything simple but convincing.